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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Wed Feb 17, 2010 12:55 pm

I put my hand in his and we left to go after kindo sensei "I don't even know how to fight!!!" I yelled in my melodic voice "I was never taught how to fight......" Mika my cat had shouted again never leaving my side until she bacame too tired of running she transformed into a wolf then she caught up to us in one long leap. "Wow! Mika very nice landing!!" I never had any friends so when Yin said he'd protect me I felt happy! My parents are no longer here with me I was banished because I was so powerfull that i had accidently destroyed the school and some of the older more experienced shinobi....I was a disgrace to my family and nobody liked me anyway........ so the girls in my class all joined up and bullied me it didn't bother me at first but then they got worse and worse. They cornered me cut my hair, cut up my face with glass from beer bottles, and sewed my lips together.....I ran away vowing I'd never fight nor come back again..... (It's a bit out of order but you get the point... I hope!)
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Wed Feb 17, 2010 3:28 pm

"Mika i know of your pain and suffering and what has happined to you. You are safe with me, if you want i will help you to control the hidden powers that our clan has, being a decendent i feel that it is my deauty to help you. thats the reasion i asked you to join me and itzi here." Said Kindo as they walked with itzi.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Wed Feb 17, 2010 3:45 pm

"Um okay then....... that's fine..." Mika said quietly
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Wed Feb 17, 2010 10:33 pm

Itzi continued to walk being all calm collected lost in thought as they head off to do the mission. Yet the only thing that has his mind captivated is what he is going to eat when they rest maybe it would be a instant bowl of ramen? Or maybe even a quick and sweet delight....He noticed that everyone was in some sort of conversation but all he got out of it was "Itzi." As Itzi's attention was seemingly drawn out he didn't notice the tree in front of his path as he runs directly into it while one the branches snags his mask and starts to tear it deeply. He snaps back to reality as fast as he could trying to keep his face from being seen as his mask was torn completely off.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Thu Feb 18, 2010 2:40 pm

Kira ran towards Itzi as his mask fell to the ground she repaired it the best she could and gave it back "Here you go Itzi....... I hope it'll work......" I said cautiously "I hope I fixed it right......" I placed the repaired mask in his hands and ran up to Kindo and Yin sempai I COULDN'T BELIEVE I HAD TALKED TO SOMEONE!!! I was so excited that i spoke to yet another person!
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Thu Feb 18, 2010 6:28 pm

Still holding his face and concealing it one or two scars still can be seen. "Thank you Kira-chan. I don't know what I woulda done if you weren't able to fix this." He puts on his mask and goes to the front of the group once again without saying another word this time paying more attention to everything.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Sat Feb 20, 2010 8:07 pm

"Itzi you really need to be more carefull, actually you need to pay more attention if your planing on geting to where we are going in one peace, and i hope you know that we are being followed by mist ninja," Said Kindo as itzi put his mask on.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Sat Feb 20, 2010 8:29 pm

"Yeah, yeah I know I do...and trust me I already knew that as well. They have actually been following us for awhile now, just watching our movements and all that...lets just keep an eye on them for now eh?" Itzi adjusts his mask just a bit more before turning back around and continues his walking as he gets the feeling [Oh great I have to start fighting again....already]
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Sat Feb 20, 2010 9:02 pm

"OK What ever you say itzi but i htink that you know as well as i that this is gona end up turning into a fight" said kindo as the four continued to walk along
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Sat Feb 20, 2010 9:57 pm

"Do we really have to fight?" I asked hesitantly "I can't fight....just fix and heal things......"I look around at my surroundings and saw a man in the tree's "Is he supposed to be up thee like that?" I pointed to the guy in the mist on the tree and shouted up to him "HEY!!!Sir I can see you!!!" he didn't seem to care but i saw the look on his face a shocked expression showed that he didn't realize i saw him
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Sun Feb 21, 2010 1:08 pm

Itzi sighs..."Well now we have to fight...Kira stay near Yin." He looks over at Kindo to go after the other one as Itzi suddenly disappears kunai in hand and attacks the surprised mist ninja catching him by surprise.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Sun Feb 21, 2010 3:28 pm

All of a sudden they were being attacked by mist ninjas. Of course Yin could sense them earlier but he didn't expect the attack to happen so suddenly.
Itzi sempi ordered him to stay near Kira so he did.
"Man Kira chan reacted faster then me," Yin muttered to himself "*sigh* I have so much to learn."
Yin pulled out his kunai knife prepared to fend off whatever attack came at him.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Sun Feb 21, 2010 8:01 pm

I don't know what it is I just saw him....." I said a bit worried and hid behind Yin kun "Yin why is it we have to fight? Kindo sempai!! WATCH OUT!!! There's one right behind you!!! Mika! Help Kindo and Itzi Sempai!!!!" Mika turned her attention to the mist ninja behind kindo sempai scratching at him but not making a mark and jumped when she sensed the mist behind her "Kira I will do my best with these things but I cannot make a mark on them with my claws....." "That's fine just make sure they don't gang up on the sempai's!!!" I told my cat Mika when I turned around a mist ninja grabbed me and took off "HELP!!!"
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Sun Feb 21, 2010 8:47 pm

Kira chan asked "Yin why is it we have to fight?"
"I don't know if there's a specifice reason Kira chan," said Yin as he threw kunai knives at mist ninjas.
"But we have to fight Kira chan, otherwise we'll get killed. It's not like the other guys are going to stop throwing kunai knives at us because we asked nicely."
Yin wondered if she heard him since she was ordering her cat to help Kindo sensei and Itzi sempi. Suddenly, Kira chan cried for help. Yin turned to see her being taken by a mist ninja. Yin quickly dashed after them.
"Hey bastard let her go." he shouted.
The mist ninja threw a kunai knife that fataly hit Yin in the chest, but when the blow should have killed him Yin turned into a block of wood instead. The mist ninja was in shock and didn't notice that the real Yin was about to ambush him. Yin quickly thrusted the kunai knife in the ninja's chest and the mist ninja let go of Kira chan and dropped dead.
"Good thing substitution jotsu is my specailty," Yin said.
Yin looked at the kunai knife thrusted into the dead ninja. It reminded him of how he killed his mother. Yin shook his head that was all behind him now and he was prepare to take another life when he became a shinoibi.
'Thinking about bad memories will only get in my way,' he thought 'I'll only make Kira chan worry and I'll let down Kindo sensei. Got to get my head in the game.'
He turned to Kira chan and said "Are you alright Kira chan? Let's get back to sensei. They probably finished those small frys."
As Yin started walking a cold chill ran down his spine. Someone with evil intetions was watching them or more specifcly Yin. But who would keep an eye him? Kindo sensei was the only one who ever took an interest in him. The evil presence dissapeared before Yin could discover who it was.
'Who was that?' he asked himself 'I'll have to tell sensei.'
Then he took Kira chan's hand and escorted her back to Kindo sensei and Itzi sempi
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Thu Feb 25, 2010 8:24 pm

Just as yin kira had yell watch out kindo had made a clone and dashed off to meat the masses of ninja that were comming there way he only hoped that Yin could protect kira."Why are there so many ninja here" thought kindo as he went to meat a croud of thirty ninja and sensed that Itzi was in the same situation. "Damn 100 ninja for just us man this is going to be a long trip. i expected interference but this is rediclous." thought kindo as he engaged the thirty ninja. at that point he sensed that somone was watching the battle. in which kindo ended the fight by using his jutsu which also helped itzi in his fight. Justr as he and itze reached the two the presence dissappeared.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Fri Feb 26, 2010 3:00 pm

I looked up and briefly saw the guy watching Yin....He had a scar over his left eye and a red under kimono that showed slightly....He dissapeared as quickly as he came "Why did they have to grab me so harshly??? It hurt....." I said quietly to myself "ow! that really did hurt!" I fell to the ground in pain I looked for a mark of any kind and saw a little spot where the ninja guy had stuck something in my body.... "I'll kill him!!" my other side said "Good god this hurts....." I try to focus and place my hands near the puncture mark and heal myself
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Sat Feb 27, 2010 12:00 am

The cell bars glimmered in the sunlight, my keen blue-silver eyes catching and locking on to every detail, as I had been taught to do for so long. Long, midnight black hair cascaded over my face, and I peered through it like a beast waiting for prey. `Where am I? And how did I get here?` Thoughts raced through my mind as I kept my attention clearly focused on everything in the vicinity. `I have to get out...somehow...` I looked up at the small slit for a window, trying to come up with some sort of escape. `It's too small to climb through.` I concluded, as I shuffled a little bit.

As I did there came subtle clinks and jangles of chains. `And I'm chained to the wall...how quaint...` I lifted my arm to look at the iron bracer encasing my hand. I frowned, looking closer when I realized, `It's also reinforced with chakra, just like the bars...someone doesn't want me to get out of he-` Just then, I heard footsteps walking towards my prison, and I quickly stood up to face my captor. "Well well well, you're awake I see...my young prodigy Soul...peculiar name for a young boy, don't you think?" The voice was oily, smooth, and almost hypnotizing. `It could almost fit a snake...`

The stranger stepped into the light, and I saw his face. `Oh yeah...definitely a snake...` "I know you..." I said as softly as I could to keep him from hearing my real voice. "Orochimaru..." His yellow eyes flickered in the light, and his ever-present smile seemed to beam with pride at the thought of my capture. `But why me? I'm nothing special, so why would an S class criminal be interested in me?` As if in answer to my thought, he said, "I'm sorry to inform you at such a short notice, but I'm going to need that blood of yours for a little experiment...after all, it's very hard to find a kekkei genkai of such rarity as yours today...it will be very useful indeed." He laughed as if in glee from the very thought.

`Kekkei genkai? Me? I didn't even know I had one! Yet...how could I not know? It makes no sense!` I stared straight back into his eyes, and a powerful fury seemed to boil deep inside me. I sprinted with all my strength at him, a resonating CLANG echoing through what I would assume to be a hall as I reached the end of my chains. My arms spread open, my muscles taught, and my eyes piercing directly back into his, I said in nothing more than a whisper, "You'll never get the chance." The bracers had cracked ever so slightly along the edge.... (Hope it's not too long, kinda got into a writing mood, heh.X3)
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Mon Mar 01, 2010 1:59 pm

"Okay yin!!" I shouted and jumped to attention and we both walked to Kindo Sensei "Kindo sensei!!! Yin sama saved me!!!" I said excitedly "I was so scared when the Mist ninja took me at first the---" I stopped mid sentance and looked around at the surroundings 'No one's there but why do I have the feeling of being watched and mocked......' I turned and inspected a tree....I bet I look really stupid to them I noticed that THIS tree had toes...... I poked the toes and then tickled them to have another ninja jump away from me "HEY!!! CUT THAT OUT!!!!" The ninja with blonde hair yelled at me "That tickled!!!"
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Mon Mar 01, 2010 2:33 pm

I woke up, running a hand through my red hair my father had passed on to me. I heard two people talking, and froze so as to not attract attention. I thought back, remembering the events leading up to now. I had been racing myself in the forest when a dark cloud had surronded me, putting me to sleep. I had had faint sensations of being carried. I coughed suddenly, then shrank away from the door.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Mon Mar 01, 2010 4:35 pm

Orochimaru simply grinned smugly, and replied in his silky voice, "We'll see Soul...we'll see..." He turned from me and walked away. "I'll be seeing you again soon. We have much to discuss about your kekkei genkai, Soul, very much indeed," he added with a small laugh. It made the hairs on the back of my neck stand on end. `Damn he gives me the creeps...` I watched him until he was completely out of sight. Only then did I relax and step away from the cell bars, cringing at the sound of the chains creaking and clanging as they rested on the floor once more, like massive iron snakes. `Seems even things only slightly related to him remind me of serpents...` I sighed, resuming my position on the cell floor and gazing out the prison bars, as if hoping someone would come and save me.

"I don't know if I can take much more of this place," I muttered to myself. `Then why don't you get out?` Questioned a deep, powerful voice somewhere in my mind....
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Tue Mar 02, 2010 2:53 pm

The smooth-voiced man walked by the door to the room I was locked in. He opened a small door. "Hello, little demon girl. Your father knew me well." I snarled at him, my sea-like eyes snapping.
"Don't speak of Gaara with that filthy tounge." I spat at the door. I could feel the sharp points of my teeth making bulges in my lips. I knew that, being the daughter of a man who held a demon, I would be eventually used in an expirement. Of course it had to be the day I could move away from my villiage and look for work where they didn't know me. I stood up as best as I could with my legs being chained down and my arms wrapped in flame-resistant coths. "Let me out or I will burn this place down."
"This room is made of non-flammable materials, special built for you." The man smiled and looked like a corbra. "Just sit pretty until I decide what part you will play in my plans." He left and I was plunged into darkness.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Wed Mar 03, 2010 7:08 am

I heard something far north of here "Kindo sempai.......I think there are people to the north of here that need our help......" I said quietly suddenly very aware of who was around me and what was around me "I know it's not where we are supposed to go but I think it might be the best if we go up north I feel a strong pull coming from the north......can we go?" I look north and start to walk that direction without meaning to "Itzi sempai, Kindo sempai please can we go and rescue the people that are captured please!" I turned around and tried not to cry.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Thu Mar 04, 2010 11:22 am

As Kira chan begged Kindo sensei to go to those unknown ninjas rescue, Yin couldn't help but admire Kira chan's sensing ability. She sensed those mist ninjas before he could now she sense unseen ninjas. He could only faintly hear the small cries for help in the distance. Yin wondered if Kindo sensei would put the mission on pause to save them.
'What is our mission anyway?' Yin thought 'We just took off following Itzi sempi and then we got attacked with no explanation.'


(Here's a picture of Yin. I have to say its not bad for my first time drawing on a computer. Obviously its far from professional manga but hey you get the idea.)
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Fri Mar 05, 2010 3:30 pm

I calmed down and decided to try and talk to the other prisoners. I yelled, "Hello? Is anyone else in this place?" I then screamed, "HELP!" hoping if there were people outside they would hear. I wanted to get out of here without using my gift...
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Fri Mar 05, 2010 8:57 pm

`Who...who are you?` `I am your curse, and your blessing. I am your worst nightmare, as well as your most trustworthy and powerful ally. I am a part of you, as you are a part of me.` `But it doesn't make sense...why didn't I know about you before?` `Because you are young, and as such, weak. You know little of the world, but more than most would for your age. From your birth my existence has set you apart from others. I've always been there, lurking in the darkest corners of everything you are. They all fear you, it's an animals natural instinct to flee from predators...like you and me.` `But I don't want to hurt anyone! I just want to help...`

`Then why do you exist?` I faltered at the voice's last question, unsure of how to answer. `Exactly...you don't have an answer, because you Can't help others...you're only meant to destroy, and that's all you'll ever be able to do-` "No, you're wrong!" I said aloud, standing up as though to confront the voice's owner. "You're wrong and I'll prove it!" `Then by all means, do so. I'd like to see how far you get...` The voice went quiet, and I was left alone in the cell once more. I could feel a deep rage building in the back of my mind. `What does he know!? He's wrong! HE'S WRONG!!` I slammed my fist into the prison wall, causing the rock to crack slightly.

`I'll prove it! I can help people! And he'll find out just how wrong he is about me!`....
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