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PostSubject: naruto fan fic   Thu Feb 04, 2010 8:24 pm

hidden deep in the forest in the lland hiddin in the leaves a lone ninja walked to konohah village with the intent to protect it from iniment danger from an unseen foe from the secret clan. the clan is the clan of ninjas that hated konohah due to its Hokage sunade. her gambeling habits had earned her the hunting of the gambelers clan. thr mydterous person was a ninja named kindo amorishi. suddenley he was attacked.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Mon Feb 08, 2010 5:49 pm

Nearby, another ninja sensed the attack. His name was Yin, He had short silver hair and yellow eyes. He could easily sense the attack but what he do about it. He got kicked out of the village there was no reason to help another person when he can't even help himself. Then Yin sighed and went to go help Kindo.
"I just keep setting myself up for failure don't I," he told himself
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Tue Feb 09, 2010 9:15 pm

durring the battle between kindo and the anomous ninja kindo sensed a ninja from the hidden leaf approaching, judging by the charka level of the ninja Kindo Gathered that the new ninja was a chuning in level, which ment he woule be in serous trouble if he got into the fight. so kindo made an exception to his pact with his former master and used his most powerfull justsu. this justsu had the power to stop tim itself but at the price of all your chalkra. To prevent usage of all he only used the jutsu to half strength which allowed him to slow his oppponent enough to knock him out cold. After doing so he waited for the new ninja.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Tue Feb 09, 2010 9:55 pm

As Itzi is walking through the land of fire he notices that strange clan of ninja starts headed towards Konohagakure,
out of his constant state of curiousity he starts to follow from behind to notice what's going on. As he gets closer and closer to the village he feels an entire body of chakra disappear. Itzi picks up the pace and heads to the site as fast as he can hoping he wasn't to late. Once he gets there he lands right behind a fallen body and notices it was the lead of the squad headed to Konoha.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Thu Feb 11, 2010 2:08 pm

Yin quickly appeared to help Kindo. He was prepared for a huge fight, instead he found all of the attackers knocked out already.
Yin stared at Kindo wondering who he was and what village was he from. He was clearly powerful if he handled this many enemies by himself.
'He appears to be a friend but I better keep my gaurd up,' he thought.
"Yo, I come all this way to help you out, only to find you already took care of it," said Yin "Just my luck. Then again this really hasn't been my week anyway. I'm Yin by the way and you are?"
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Thu Feb 11, 2010 2:17 pm

Itzi starts to walk closer to where a new body of chakra happened to appear after looking around and noticing the four fallen victims. Still being careful he stays cautious and moves slowly towards what he can now see two people talking. Not knowing which side of the fight they were on he decides to observe from where he is for now.
"To think I was trying to get to Kirigakure before day break..." he says to himself in the quietest voice he can make.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Thu Feb 11, 2010 2:54 pm

In the shadows of where the other ninja's were fighting Slept a girl under a nearby willow tree hanging over a waterfall. She awoke from the noise and grumbled in her sleep. "Why is there so much noise this morning? There's never been THIS much noise before...." She saw three ninjas fighting and decided to look into this predicament she perched herself ontop of willow tree to watch "hmph silly people fighting will never get you anywhere......" 'How old are you really?!' The young girls inner self asked 'You act older than you are!!!!!' 'I'm as old as I look!' She told herself 'I'm 15 years old!' She sat there bemused and content to let things keep going
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Thu Feb 11, 2010 6:09 pm

"Well new comer i bet you think that im a thret but im not im from the hidden leaf village, i was on my way there when this groop showed up, then i sense you comming and by your chalkra levels i knew you would be out matched so i took care of it before u got here. Well dont feer there are no more threts around but then again there are two others hiding around here one from the village and another who i dont recconise but i can tell is headed tords the village. Oh and i know you were kicked out of the village for mulptial screwups so if you want to live come with me and i will train you, and dont worry Tsunadai will let this slide due to she owes me a few favors." Said Kindo The new ninja said nothing as kindo left for the village and followed to see if he would hold to what he said, when the two reached the gate to the vikllage kindo turned to the ninja and said,"well i can see that you do not trust me but that is to be expected, well i guss i should tell you my rank as a ninja of this village, im a Special Joning and also a sensai to a few students, i just got back from a misssion in the sand village. So if you wish i will take you under my wing."
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Thu Feb 11, 2010 6:53 pm

"My Mistress does not talk to people out of her kind!" A small voice Piped up "My mistress's mouth is sewed up!!!! I am the only one who is linked to her mind.....I have been ever since she created me!!!" The little voice came from a Full black cat with one yellow eye and one red eye which curled up to Kira's legs in which The young ninja picked up her cat and translator "She thanks you for you're niceness, she hasn't been treated fairly since her parents passed.......um more like murdered......" The young ninja looked evilly at her cat which told her to finish what she started o say "My mistress also wants you to know that if you want to see the stitches they left all you have to do is rub her lips to see the black string they sewed her up with......" I placed the cat on my shoulder and wiped the cover up her mother gave her when she was kicked out. You see three X's on her lips that symbolized the stitches were cross stitched closed The cat then mewed "She is very sad that she can no longer sing, or build up her chakra"
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Thu Feb 11, 2010 7:48 pm

"really then well i wills see what Tsunadi can do for her like i told this one she owes me a few favors. so if you want you can join me wile i see her." Said kindo when the cat told j=him of the girl before him.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Thu Feb 11, 2010 8:22 pm

Kira followed the guy who was supposedly her new sempai... The girl was at least five feet away from her sempai. Kira was being stared at and she closed the distance between her and Kindo and buried her face in between his arm and torso "PLEASE DON'T LET THEM LOOK AT MY MISTRESS!" The cat mewed into his ear "She's being stared at because of her cross stitches on her mouth......" Kira didn't like to cry nor did she like to be in public. but before she could stop herself she started to cry tears came out of her eyes making her vision blurry and she had to stop to try to wipe away the tears and before she could even try to wipe her tears away a few guards came at her and forced her up against a wall she couldn't scream so she sent her cat to get Sempai kindo "yes mistress" the cat whispered and took off looking for Kindo "MASTER KINDO!!!!!" SHE CRIED "MASTER KINDO Kira needs you're help!!!!!" Kira was pinned to the wall by two big brutes and the third brute was standing in front of her touching her all she could do was a muffled scream 'Oh I'm going to die!!!!!' she blacked out as she felt a sharp pain down on her lower body "MMMMMMUUUUUUUPPPPPHHH!!!!!" was all she was able to do before she blacked out
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Thu Feb 11, 2010 9:06 pm

just as the girl passed out kindo grabed her and took her to tsunadi. "Lady Tsunadi i need some help here" Said kindo "What Happined" asked tsunadi She was raped by a guard and due to the fact that her mouth is sown shut she couldnt scream" sain kindo well there is little that i can do for her rape but as for the mouth being sown shut i will see what i can do. ok and two favors well one if you count that i want the two new commers to be on my team." said Kindo "oh really then why should i grant this Kindo" because you owe me on Said kindio. okok well i will get to work on this girl as soon as i can but the cat must wait out with you. "no i must stay with my mistress im sorry but this is what i must do im bound to her for life and cant leave her at any time." said the cat Tsunadi let the cat in said knindo as tsunadi went to the surgery room and after an hour she can out "well it tok some doing but they are out and she should be able to speek again so come with me till she is awake kindo the cat will let us know when shes awake. so whats the statis of your mission, well it was a full success lord gara sends his thanks. SHES AWAKE yelled the cat.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Thu Feb 11, 2010 11:25 pm

As the grounds became scarce of the others Itzi decided to walk into the village to stay for the time being until he decides to start heading towards Kirigakure as he continues to head towards a place to stay he suddenly thinks to himself "Lady Tsunade needs to know the news as well" he speeds his pace and heads directly to where he would always meet her in the hospital. As he heads in he notices someone is standing with Lady Tsunade.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Fri Feb 12, 2010 2:24 pm

Kira wasn't sure of what to do she liked the fact that she could talk now but she wasn't pure anymoreshe didn't feel like talking nor did she even want to try. She sighed to try to figure out what to do as she sorted out her emotions 'I never liked showing my emotions before so why should I start now?' "Mistress?" her cat Mimi asked "Are you okay?" Kira nodded to answer mimi's question Kira licked her chapped and dry lips "Mistress why don't you try to speak???" Kira shook her head.....'I can't speak..... because that's why they sewed up my lips......' "WHO? mistress?! who sewed them up?" 'The mean girls......' As she thought this one little arrogant tear slid down her cheek from remembering this event. Kira got up and started to walk out of the room when Kindo came through the curtain "........" she said nothing and bowed the cat chimed in saying what kira thought "Thank you for getting rid of the cross stitches but I must return to the forest..... Our home....." *Takes off*
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Fri Feb 12, 2010 7:41 pm

Some much was going on in front of Yin he barely had time to process it all. He was glad the girl seemed ok but he felt helpless because he couldn't do anything to help her. He also felt neverous because Lady Tsunade was there. (She's the one who kicked him out.)
He had no idea what he wanted, how he should feel, or anything at all.
'Damn, I'm so messed up I can't help this girl, or Kindo Sempi, I can't even decide if I should take Kindo sempi's offer or not.' He thought.
As the girl started to leave, Yin walked up to Kindo Sempi.
"Thanks for the offer from before," he said "Can I get a day to think about it? I'll give you my answer soon, I just.... need to sort things out."
Then he went to follow the girl passing by another ninja on the way out.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Fri Feb 12, 2010 9:15 pm

"Ah Tsunadi Itzi has returned as well then that meand that here in a few days we are going to have to start on that mission. And im going after that girl i want her to join my squad she has tallent and as for Yin i will look after him after all hes going to accept my offer and why did you kick him out htats kinda harsh he is only a chuni dam. Oh and itzi your new weapon is ready though i dont know how much power it has yet i havnt had a chance to testit out sorry." Said kindo
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Sat Feb 13, 2010 12:09 pm

Itzi turns and looks at Kindo "Thanks for making my weapon just try to refrain from saying I'm from this village you know as well as most that I'm from a village that is no more." Itzi turns back to Lady Tsunade after speaking a few words with Kindo to get reminded of what needs to be all done in Kirigakure if not more then just in that one village. As he walked with Lady Tsunade an older shinobi threw a sheriken at Itzi cutting across his mask yelling out, "Get out of this village you ville being!!" Itzi ignored such threats and was just thankful that his mask wasn't torn to bad and that no one saw his true face.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Sat Feb 13, 2010 4:28 pm

Yin wandered through the forest thinking about Kindo sempi.
'Right now Tsunade sama probably told him why I got kicked out," he thought 'Will he think of me?'
Just then he realized he was accidently following the girl Kira and her cat.
"Great now Kira chan is going to think I'm stalker," said Yin "and Kindo sempi is going to think I'm a heartless murderer."
Yin was always a trouble maker but that was so he could get the attention of his mother who was constanly ignoring Yin. Yin thought if he would make enough noise she would notice him and love him, it seemed to work for the ninja Naruto. However, the trouble making only made her mad. Yin didn't know why his mom acted like that, maybe it was because he reminded her of his late father whom she would never talk about.
One day his mom got tierd of Yin's actions and tried to kill him. However, Yin was more skilled then she was and through a twist of cruel fate Yin ended up killing his mother.
Though is was a dispicable crime to kill one's own parent, Yin's case was out of self defense and he was only kicked out of the village, instead of getting thrown in jail. He was consdiered a mother killer ever since.
He sighed after thinking about that day.
'Though I'm pretty sure that Itzi san has it worse," Yin thought 'Not only is he from a village that doesn't exist anymore. He's constantly getting threats from the other villagers. His wieght must be heavier then mine.'
"Well, what should I do now," he asked himself "Ever since mom was killed I've had nothing to live for. Now Kindo sempi's offered me a new life. Well if he's still offering I might as well take it. It is after all, the most kindness anyone has ever shown me."
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Sat Feb 13, 2010 10:34 pm

"Tasunadi are you saying that he killed his own mother out of self defence and you kicked him out. I thought that the circumstanes of the crime had to fit the punishment and the way i see it he was punished way to sevearley for his crime if you call protecting your life a crime at all, gise dont you think that that was a bit harsh." said kindo "well now that i think about it yah your right i was to harsh, so why did you take the kid under your wing, if i may ask Kindo." Replied Tsunadi
"Well i could tell that he had no one and that he despreatley wanted to make a life for himself. I mean isnt that the way of a leaf Shinobi care for thoes who dont have anyone to care for them, hold life sacred and protect the week. Also i want some one to cary on what i have learned, and he looks to be a kind person which is the exact kind of person i want as a protoshai, and my other students might stand to learn from him i mean he is very young for a chuni, he cant be more than what 12 thats young he got to have some tallent." Said Kindo "Well as usual right on all accounts, you know that does tend to get anoing kindo. How do you know so much. Well at any rate i need you and itzi for a special S rank mission, and i expect you to take all of your students alone and that includes Yin and that girl, i expect that yin is going to take you up on your offer. Well down to the point the priority on this mission is to eliminate the rouge five from the village hidden in teh mist. They have caused to much trouble as of late and enough is enough. They have continusley atacket leaf shinobi and i will not stand for it so i want you and itzi to take care of them ASAP got it. I think that the two of you should be more that a mach for them, and i think that this might be a valueable lession for the new genin and the chuning joining your team, and itzi please dont leave any traces, that goes for you to kindo. Move out as soon as you are prepared and itzi one more thing what is the statis of that new posin.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Sat Feb 13, 2010 10:42 pm

Itzi scratches the top of his head and sighs...."Lady Tsunade you got it all mixed up again gennin aren't allowed on S rank missions and it's only squads of four" after thinking for a second he remembered Tsunade has a pretty gruesome temper and expected to get laid out before that happened he started to head to the door leaving her to Kindo completely forgetting to reply about the poison
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Sat Feb 13, 2010 10:54 pm

Ok Kindo you know the drill and have itzi get back here that posin is vital to some research and hes right so i will have your squad go with naruto when he returns, if thats ok with you." Said tsunadi as itzi left the room Well i would prefer that they hace time to train on their own so if its ok with you give them leave till we get back.' Replied kindo. "before you leave have itzi get back in here ok" said kind as he left the room. "hay itzi tsunadi wants you and if i were you i wouldnt keep her waiting" said kindo as he ran past itzi.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Sat Feb 13, 2010 11:01 pm

Itzi keeps walking out leaving a little note with Shizune about the poison so he doesn't have to face Tsunade again as he laugh he says out loud "I don't have to take orders from someone who isn't my leader!" As Itzi continues his walk out of the village he he notices Yin off in the distance wondering what he was up to but shrugs and starts heading towards Kirigakure as he was intending to go towards to begin with. As Itzi got out almost into the forest he sits down and waits for the rest of the group as he grumbles to himself "I hate waiting...what takes people so long seriously?"
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Sat Feb 13, 2010 11:12 pm

As kindo headed out of the village he saw itzi watching yin and kira. So he went over to them and Yelled "HAY" startled yin and kira looked at kindo. "now that i have your attention we have orders from lady tsunadi to cary out a mission. this is a S rank mission so its going to be very dangerous and yin i know your accepting my offer so get ready and meek me by itzi when you have every thing you need, just rember that this is going to take a wile so grab extra than normal." said kindo. After kindo spoke the two split with out a word and in about thirty minuets met itzi and kindo. "ok Itzi take the lead i have no clue where to go" said kindo after yin and kira showed up.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Sat Feb 13, 2010 11:21 pm

Itzi stood up and stretched a little bit looking at everyone for a moment. Then without a word turned around sighing again as he started to walk towards Kirigakure. "I need to make a stop and talk to the Mizukage when we get into the land of the mist by the way." Right before Kindo can interrupt saying strictly for the mission Itzi mentions, "Remember I'm not a leaf shinobi I was headed there for a reason anyways." Itzi smirks and starts to run faster hoping everyone can keep up.
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PostSubject: Re: naruto fan fic   Sun Feb 14, 2010 6:14 pm

Yin didn't know why he was surprised Kindo sensei actually wanted him to be his student and now they would all go on a mission together. He was ready for anything and was determined to not let Kindo sensei down.
He looked at Kira chan and offered his hand to her "Kira chan let's go," he said "Don't worry I'll protect you if things get rough or maybe you'll be the one protecting me. Whatever the case is I got back. Now let's go meet up Kindo sensei."
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