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PostSubject: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Wed Feb 03, 2010 12:24 pm

my idea came from a bunch of people writing one story continueing where The previous person left off.... ^-^ It was funny.....


It was a dark and stormy night I was haveing a hard time getting to sleepbecause the monster in my closet was close to getting out.... I tried to Repress the giant beast but to no avail. Everytime I tried to sleep he'd wake me up and scare me.... Although i knew what i saw was an illusion, my fear began to grow. Something wasn't right. By the time i went back to sleep, I noticed the closet door opening further and further. I then heard the Giant beast say "Don't be afraid I'm not trying to hurt you, I only want to be you're friend." he said "I see how much time you spend in here and how lonley you are...." "But you're a monster....." I said feverently "And plus why would you want to be friends with me? I'm a nobody in my school...." "I am only different from you not a monster...." rumbled the beast "You are the weak one in that school...It is them who are the--The outsiders." I shifted my eyes back to the closet from which he emerged from.......The beast was giagantic, fury and blue. His head bumped against the ceiling, his lenghty arms reached the floor, he had gental eyes even for one his size then he spoke again....."I have always......................"

BEEP BEEP BEEP The alarm goes off and I wake to find him gone......I asked myself "Was it just a dream?"


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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Wed Feb 03, 2010 1:49 pm

It had to be a dream. Probably... Possibly. I went downstairs to get ready for school. I saw my little brother sitting at the table, his arms in a strange position. A wet snap later, and cereal was on my stomach. "You little... Now I need to change! And this was my favorite shirt!"
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Thu Feb 04, 2010 8:01 pm

I can't believe that it was only just a dream..... or should I? GRRR!!!! I went to school that day and went straight to my normal group of friends an started "Okay i had the most weirdest dream of my life last night.... but It was so real that I'm beginning to doubt it was a dream! please help me figure out whats happening!!!!!"
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Thu Feb 04, 2010 8:13 pm

{since you dont have a name till u post this girls name im gona have to refer to her as mizuki}]

"hay watch it im fragile mizuki" said the strange gye as he went to sit at a table after being ran over by her
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Thu Feb 04, 2010 8:23 pm

"HEY LOOK DUDE!!!!! I JUST HAD THE WEIRDEST DREAM OF MY LIFE!!!!!!" I shouted not really meaning to be mean "And I'm not mizuki.......My name is Mika..... it means new moon......" But thank you and I'll try to watch where I'm going...... although no promises....."
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Thu Feb 04, 2010 8:29 pm

i dont know about that i just h.ad a very weird dream last night. and by the way my name is paku.
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Thu Feb 04, 2010 8:40 pm

"prove it paku!" I growled out " either way it's been fun....look I've got to get to class.... bye!" I ran off to my first hour class 'GEEZ what is with this guy?!' I thought through out class 'damn..... I need to find out what my dream meant....... and fast!!!'
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Thu Feb 04, 2010 9:06 pm

wow who was that girl and how did i know her name, gir why did i see her in my dream and why was i a beast. it makes no sense. thought paku through out his class. why why why i cant get her out of my head
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Thu Feb 04, 2010 9:16 pm

'Damn...... why is the beast still in my head???' "GOD DAMNIT!!!!" I shouted in class and got up from my seat and walked out of class going to the gardens where i could focus my mind back to school "I have always what?!" I asked outloud I ran to the gardens waterfall and just sat there thinking 'Why am i getting mad?!' I inwardly shouted at myself 'It's not like this is a story book or anything!'
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Fri Feb 05, 2010 5:36 pm

what is going on with me, why cant i focus its like im focused on only her but ive never seen her before today. gir why is she stuck in my head. WHY IS SHE STUCK IN MY HEAD. he yelled in class. Shut it Paku or get out. said the teacher who was in the middle of her lecture. Um sorry i will just step outside said paku as he lef the room. as he walked down the hall he had a sudded urge to visit the schools garden, and as he walked tords the garden he somehow knew tha tthe girl who had run him over and was in his dream was there. and sure enough standing next to the waterfall was her.
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Fri Feb 05, 2010 6:03 pm

How old is Mika? I have an idea...
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Fri Feb 05, 2010 6:05 pm

Deep in thought I didn't sense anyone near me nor did I feel the presence of anyone around me..... "GOD DAMMIT!!! Why did my alarm clock have to ring?!?!?!?!?!" I shouted suddenly coming back from my meditative state "Damn......... can't think can't even take a nibble of the Rose I had picked..........god dammit...... why?" I felt a presence then I spun around to see the guy I had run over earlier today I was the only one to visit the gardens that I knew of. I took care of the plants. They were my best friends. I never knew how to deal with other kids when my mom died and father got sick soon after that then a year later he died as well I work at the gardens at the school to earn money for the house i live in now.
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Fri Feb 05, 2010 6:18 pm

do your the one who tends the garden, its beautifull i happen to only come here in the middle of the night because it is really peasefull, and when i get kicked out of class which happens alot due to i burst out suddenley. Well i never thought that such youth could tend such beauty. it is very well done, you have a very green thumb, but i bet i can make this rose here even more beautifull. So what do u say i show you the power of a garden. When she just knoded paku picked a rose that was withered and made it grow to the size of mellon with vibrent colors. Well i wish that i could of know true beauty back then.
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Sun Feb 07, 2010 3:19 pm

Staring out the window, I notice Mika and another guy in the garden. I left the library, making sure my patch covered my eye. Brushing some hair out of my eyes, I hurried to the back door. Slipping out, I hid behind a bench to see what kind of mood she was in. She looks so beautiful... She'll never like me. My other form is too unpredictable.

((He looks like this http://cdn.myanimelist.net/images/characters/8/35747.jpg ))
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Sun Feb 07, 2010 6:13 pm

Paku got kicked out of class agian and once again that made the class president look bad, which just happens to be me Ritsuka. Why I'm the class president, I have no idea and I trasfered here a year ago too. I guess no one else wanted the job so stick it with the new kid. I never did talk to Paku about class I've pretty much let him be, he won't listen to me anyway. Today however, he seemed different, I can't put my finger on it. As soon as the teacher was done with her lecture I followed him.
On the way I passed by a window showing my reflection. A pretty girl with short red hair and green eyes stared back at me.
"Hey good looking," I told myself and I countined to follow Paku.
He was at a garden with some girl. I was to far away to hear what they were talking about but I could see where this was going. Paku has a girlfriend, no wonder he acted so strangely today. With luck she'll do my job for me and set him strieght. Case closed job done, good work Ms. class president.
Still, something bothered me. Who is this girl she looks femilar? She's pretty though wonder why she's with Paku oh well. It was then I realised Paku is probably going to mess things up with her. I have to stay and watch and make sure he doesn't screw things up. For once my job as class president is interesting.
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Mon Feb 08, 2010 3:11 pm

{haha Nice twist i like it but watch it this could get tricky to follow lol and watch it im known to turn your style aganst you so have fun}

As Paku and Mika talked at the garden Paku sensed a new Presence approaching from behin the bench to the right of them and then another person from behind them. "hay mika we are attracting quite a croud and i dont know about you but i think that the matter i want to discuss with you involves these new people, expecailly not the class president. Lord only know what she thinks of me due to my constant out bursts in claass. Well im going to leave if you wish to follow that is up to you but if you do, do it quick becausei dont want to try and slow down i really would like to keep where im going a secret." Said paku where he bolted off after speeking, he was headed toords the castle on the edge of town. to ever ones knoledge it was empty but he knew better than any one that in that castle was more life than the town could ever dream of. The suberb that the school was in was on the edge of the great city of Frankfurt, in germany. as he headecd tords the castle he wondered wether mika would follow him or not.
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Tue Feb 09, 2010 2:53 pm

I watched him go into the castle but did not move I turned away and continued to work on the garden "I'm sorry my dears I want to go but if i do I might get into trouble again for wandering off...." I said to the roses "not that Uncle Benito would mind...... but I'd rather not get in trouble today...." I walked to the stream and got a bucket of water and poured some on the roses and went to get some more water. "Plus I have too much to do today anyway! This school has a really big garden..." I sighed in regret I really wanted to go to the castle paku went in but couldn't bring myself to go the castle intrigued me as much as it terrified me "Damn my own cowardice......." I whispered to myself and went back to watering the Roses I turned around because I thought i saw someone behind me but i guess i was wrong "I'm giving my self the creeps......again........" I picked another rose and it turned into a child like creature (Roselya) right in my hands "Can you be my mistress?" It asked "please without a mistress I cannot hold a body form!!" "um If i do what will happen?" I asked questionaly "Will I loose half my life or something?" "OH NO NO NO!" she said politley "Just a prick of blood will do so whenever I'm around you I'll be in this form....." She smiled geuinily happy "Ok then have at it...." I said not paying attention to who was around me she pricked my finger and we became together as one "Ouch....."
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Tue Feb 09, 2010 3:38 pm

I watched Paku run off into the castle. God damn't he knew I watching them. I wanted to go and follow him so I could see how far this relationship of his is but then his girlfriend didn't seem to follow. I could go and give Paku some advice but his girlfriend might see us together and get the wrong inpretion, I'am striking gorgious after all. (Ritsuka is not self absorbed at all.)
So I just stood there like an idiot watching Paku's girlfriend talk to the plants. She takes care of the flowers what a sweet heart, Paku how did you snag her? She seemed really femilar to me though, she kind of looks like a girl from my other school but that can't be because well .... the girl I'm thinking of is dead but that all in the past.
Let's see I know I've seen her around school before what's her name.....?
That's when the rose turned into a child like creature. "Can you be my mistress?" It asked "please without a mistress I cannot hold a body form!!"
What the hell it just talked!!! Ok, there's got to be a logical reason for all of this. Of corse, Paku has a girlfriend, a talking plant, me actually doing my job, it all makes sense, I'm in a dream. I'll just punch myself and I'll wake up to a girlfriendless Paku and non talking plants and get back to ignoreing my duties as class president.
"OW," I cried as I punched myself. I almost knocked myself out, who does that? Ok, so I'm not dreaming then the other explaination is I've gone insane.
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Tue Feb 09, 2010 9:29 pm

when paku reached the castle he realised that Mika didnt follow him. so he went to the tallest tower in the town to watch over her as she tended the garden. his only thoughts were why had the president thought that he and mika were dating, at that point he felt bad for reading her mind but he really wanted to know why she had followed him. "Well school days over so guss i will see if i cant figure out why mika appeared in my dreams.
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Thu Feb 11, 2010 2:50 pm

I watched as the rose transformed, scoffing. Nothing more than a young nymph. If only larger creatures were around to hunt. Then my beast form could be useful, instead of hurting my missions. Zonai took his phone out of his pocket almost before it rang. "Yes? New mission? Mmk, old castle, edge of town. Might be medium threat, but most likely low. Got it. Mmk, bai~!" He put his phone away, then walked off school grounds. Crouching down, he turned into a large black wolf with one good, cold blue eye. His other eye was a burnt scar. Loping off to the castle, he scented something familiar. Ignoring it, he leapt straight into a second story window, landing inside with a soft thump.
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Thu Feb 11, 2010 7:52 pm

I was walking around with my new um nymph "I can't wait to go home!" I smiled when i said it "I won't tell anyone I promise!" "OKAY!!" the nymph squealed happily "I get to go home with my new mistress!!!" I started to walk home when she heard a really low growl "oh no what was that?!" I said only slightly frightened "Did you hear it?" "my name is Momo by the way" Momo said to change he subject "And yes i heard it too...." we kept moving forward until I heard the growl got louder and something jumped out at us I was shocked to see a great big giant monster black mamba I couldn't do anything else but scream and I did *Screams* "OH MY GOODNESS!!!!!! HELP!!!!!!"
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Thu Feb 11, 2010 9:14 pm

just as mika and momo were about to get atacked paku appeared out of nowhere to defend them. MIKA RUN TO THE CASTLE AND ASK THE DOOR FOR PROTECTION YOU WILL BE SAFE MIKA AND DONT ASK QUESTIONS JUST DO IT. As muka excaped paku was slashed by the beast. "who could have the same powers as i do and control them freeley normally the power only works at night." thought paku when he knew she was safe paku made his excape to the castle he knew that beating the monster in his current state was imposible. when he reached the castle he passed out.
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Fri Feb 12, 2010 2:37 pm

I ran as fast as I could but tripped several times when I thought I was safe I felt something slimey around my ankle....It pulled and I fell on my face and went where it pulle me *screams* "OH MY GOSH!!!!" I screamed and Momo said "oh no!!! It's back!!! when was that there?!" It dragged me back to where it was. When it had me in front of it again It wrapped it's tounge all around me. I shivered in responce "oh gross......" Momo was freaking out "Momo go get help!!!" She nodded and went to get help 'Great!! Now I'm alone' I thought as I stored up energy and released it to make the tounge let go of me. I don't usually like to use this power but I had no other choice I looked the beast in the eye and said "Calm down and be nice!" It stopped and continued to stare at me "Now go back where you came from..... understand?" The beast nodded and went to wherever it came from. I dropped to my knees to regain my composure "I used too much energy....." I wispered to myself "Crap he had a a big ass lock on his mind........"
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Fri Feb 12, 2010 3:16 pm

I woke up with a headache wondering what knocked me out. OH yeah that was me when I saw Paku's girlfriend talk to the rose thing. (She is still getting the wrong impresstion about those two.)
I picked myself up wondering where everyone went. Hm I must have dreamt the whole thing there's no way that girl was talking to a rose. I also dreamt about a guy turning into a wolf, man I'm going crazy. It has to be anti-drepression drugs I'm taking.
I dug through my pockets and found a medicine bottle with only two pills left. I better get a refill before I go home. I took one pill and then put the drugs back into my pocket. Then I started to walk home when I heard a girl screaming. Was I imagining it again? The screams still countined. I rushed over to try and find the source of the screaming when I found Paku's girlfriend about to get eaten by a beast. I was stunned, I have to be dreaming theres no way this is happening. Suddenly, the beast let go of her and went away. The girl dropped to her knees was she ok?
"Hey are you ok man?" I asked as I went to her "What was that thing?"
This can't be it's just the drugs right the drugs.
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PostSubject: Re: Beauty and the Beast remake!   Fri Feb 12, 2010 9:07 pm

"that my friend was a shadow beast. Normally they only are able to transform during the night but i guss there is much i have to learn." said paku as he entered the garden again.
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